A. C. Denny

Hi! I'm A. C. Denny and I read your first post this morning. I thought it was a good peek inside a typical young 13-year-old teenage girl's life. This would ...

Thanks. Since my Internet is too old for this kind of site, the whole left half of the screen is invisible to me. Sometimes I can’t even see what I’m ...

Hey, I have a quesion about the points thing. How do we check to see how many points we have? Is it in our personal info???

I very much enjoyed reading this short piece of work you have beautifully created. There was only one mistake I found that no one has mentioned. I can see that ...

Wrapping her shawl around her slender shoulders, Liana shivered in the chilly beginning of the winter wind, which swept its way down all the way from the Colorado River to ...

Wrapping her shawl around her slender shoulders, Liana shivered in the chilly beginning of the winter wind, which swept its way down all the way from the Colorado River to ...

You have a good, catchy first sentence. However, it needs to be like, "Snap!", since the word was shouted. Otherwise, cute story! I hope you continue on with it.

I agree with blaster219. Remember the Civil War? 1899 was even after a time of growth throughout the prairie. Most of it was settled by free ranging cattle territory. Also, ...

Like the style and suspence! Let's discuss this part of the sentence: "The inside of the building is easy enough to move quickly from one side of the building to ...

Most of your writing abilities are correct, well put togeather and orginized. The only problweakpoint in this story is the first paragraph. It wasn't very eye-catching, which is the most ...

For some reason I can't finish it. Here it is... It was summer of 1848. This was the day I found the Coonville Camp. I pranced my way through the ...

That was so cute! Your idea and creativity to make this was great. Here are some suggestions. It's not what you say or how you say it. Its mostly what's ...

The first paragraph was able to catch my eye without much trouble at all. Very disriptive work. I am a very visual person and I enjoyed this. Nevertheless, try to ...

I was not a fan of second person writting untill I read this! This was great. Discriptions, thoughts, and the suspence was just right. I have never read a second ...

Just a page that I scratched out today. This is the first peice of work I have ever submitted online and I wanted to get something in. Well, here it ...